Michael Finally Grows Up – Comments Section

Story Blurb:

When up-and-coming artist Avery Scott spots a shy wallflower at a party, he just can’t seem to help himself– he brings him home. Michael’s sexual hungers tread on the kinky side, even by Avery’s standards, but Avery is more than capable of giving him what he needs. Before he knows it, five years have gone by, and Michael is still in his bed. Avery is comfortable. Even happy. And he’s famous, which is a bonus.

But now Michael is changing… into something that Avery’s been having nightmares about for most of his life.


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10 Responses to “Michael Finally Grows Up – Comments Section”

  1. Nowaki says:

    So the dark reference you were looking for was for this story? Nice!

  2. lol. No. I actually don’t think of this story as being as dark as originally intended.

    The story recs were for my own twisted enjoyment. 😉

  3. Nowaki says:

    Well I’m just started on the second Chapter so I’ll continue reading

  4. K says:

    Michael trying to hide behind Avery when they first got to the gallery – so cute! I hope he will gradually grow some confidence though. It’s such a big contrast to Avery’s arrogance (which I love).

    Is the Enscapable Nightmare phase really over? Avery kept seeing flashes of silver, but then the way the chapter ended, I don’t know?

  5. The Pecman says:

    Good writing.  This is a fairly unique piece, with a really original tone.  I like that it has moments of a TWILIGHT ZONE feel, but also covers a very real world with a lot of depth.

    One of the most interesting bits of fiction I’ve read all year.  Can’t wait to see where you go with it.


  6. @Nowaki– Hope you enjoy it. 🙂

    @K– Well, Mario did say that some faucets did not turn off easily. Next chapters should be interesting.

    @The Pecman– Thank you. The story has evolved a bit since I started it, so I can’t wait to see where it goes too. XD

  7. K says:

    Definitely looking forward to the next chapter(s). I like that you always keep us (well, me anyway) guessing!

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  9. AS says:

    Just read the latest chapter… interesting character development…. more hints about Avery’s rough past, and about the changes happening to Michael…

    Always looking forward to more. 🙂

  10. Anonymous says:

    This story is highly addictive.
    Love it!

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