Does following blurb make you want to read its story?
I was ten when Charlie Davis showed up on our doorstep. He was only a year older, but in my eyes he was cool and kind and mature. He’d barely taken a step inside when I was head over heels.
Small problem: The older we got, the more his talent for music pulled him in one direction, while my talent for…uh…sex pulled me the other way.
Bigger problem: The reason he at the door in the first place? His mom was marrying my dad.
Yeah it sounds interesting.
I’m assuming it’s gay. Making it clear the protagonist is male would help grab the readers you want I think.
Maybe just working in the protagonist’s name, assuming it’s not a gender neutral name.
Oh wow, didn’t think of that. Thank you!